Septology is a stream-of-consciousness novel throughout, a mix of sentence fragments, unconventional punctuation, and temporal shifts, meaning the painter Asle is sometimes thinking about the present and sometimes about the past.
These are all old moves, old techniques. I was a little surprised that the story of
Asle’s past life was told almost entirely in chronological order.
Fosse’s and Asle’s stream-of-consciousness has a repetitive,
looping aspect that often reminded me of – is deeply influenced by – Thomas Bernhard. Fosse is a gentler writer, lacking Bernhard’s
rage and thus his over the top humor. No
mad rants about the outrageous perfidy of Anton Bruckner or Adalbert
Stifter or their wretched Norwegian equivalents here. In Septology the humor is not in Asle’s
head but out in the real world, where somehow the characters he encounters
enact his repetitive, looping style. Septology,
like a number of late Bernhard novels, is also a novel about grief.
I have only read a few Bernhard novels but I can’t imagine him
using the sincere religious expression that is frequent in Septology. Many readers of Fosse’s book, including many
reviewers, have responded strongly to this aspect of the novel. Wyatt Mason’s review in Harper’s (August
2021) of the first two novels is a helpful example. He writes (this also appears on the back
cover of the novel):
With Septology, Fosse has found a new approach to writing fiction, different from what he has written before and—it is strange to say, as the novel enters its fifth century—different from what has been written before. Septology feels new.
Let’s pretend we did not see that “fifth century” bit. I saw this quote when I was far enough into Septology
that I had some footing, and “new” is not how it seemed. “Like Thomas Bernhard,” rather. Surely Mason will tell me what he means later
in his review.
There is nothing formally new about narratives that deploy the long sentence. Thomas Bernhard, who inherited its sound from Joyce and Woolf, pursued the long line with rage at its heart.
Hey now, I was just saying! For some
reason Mason digresses with a list of other recent writers influenced by
Bernhard – Sebald, MarÃas, Krasznahorkai – all of whom seem more formally
interesting to me than Fosse. Not to
Mason:
Fosse seems both the most obviously influenced by Bernhard and the most radically his own.
Strong claim, but now he will explain.
But what feels most striking about Fosse’s method is something this review can only gesture at.
Oh.
I can say that Fosse’s novel, its vocal progress, is incantatory, or that the prose reads like an extended prayer, which sounds blurbily [!] fine, and not wrong, just empty and familiar. Reading Septology, watching Asle progress through life and, I suspect, in parts six and seven, to the end of it, one feels—I felt—in the welter and waste of a single solitary life, the urge, inexplicably, to pray.
Not to deny the experience of Mason or any other reader, but
at no point did I feel the urge to pray.
“It would be too much to suggest that in Septology one comes to
feel the love of God, but the way Fosse wields the novel’s form does something
spooky to one’s heart.” Yes, it would be
too much, way too much. This seems like
something a specific kind of reader brings to the novel, not something in the
novel itself as Mason claims. “We are
here to pray, the form says.” I do not
think form can “say” this. Bernhard’s similar
form does not.
I am surveying the blurbs.
Ruth Margalit writes that “the experience of reading these works” is
like “the act of meditation.” Actually
she “hesitate[s]” to make the comparison, but of course does make it. Sam Sacks thinks the prose “feels almost
holy.” Dustin Illingworth thinks it “trembles
with the beauty, doubt, and gnostic weariness of great religious fiction.”
So I take it that all of that is there if you want it. I guess all of these people mean what they say. "[I]f they saw me thinking I could sit in a parked car in a turnoff saying Kyrie eleison Christie eleison, it's absurd, they'd have to laugh, but let them laugh, let them, let them, because it helps! it helps!" (p. 30-1). But I will add that the reader who is not in that market, who thinks, for example, that religious belief is a matter of psychology, may well find Septology interesting not for its novelty or aid to meditation but for its creation and exploration of the psychological interior of a complex character, a unique and enduring specialty, to go back to form, of the novel.
I should mention that the translation by Damion Searls is
superb, his project almost heroic. I can’t
judge the technical details, but his control of tone and voice is superb. He
learned a new language, Nynorsk, just to translate Fosse’s novels, with the
likely reward of complete indifference in the English world. Fosse was for a long time the most produced
living playwright in Europe, while the English theater world ignored him. (Does anyone reading this know his
plays? I have read one scene). But anyway it all worked out all right for Searls,
and Fosse.
Dolce Bellezza encouraged me to read Septology for
her Norwegian Literature month, ongoing.
I was planning to read only the first novel of the novel, The Other
Name (2019), but I had questions, and enjoyed Asle’s company, so I kept
going. Thanks!
See, this is why I don’t read reviews. I only value my opinion of what I’ve read, and those I respect, such as yours. In other words, reader’s opinions.
ReplyDeleteThis? “ I can say that Fosse’s novel, its vocal progress, is incantatory, or that the prose reads like an extended prayer, which sounds blurbily [!] fine, and not wrong, just empty and familiar.” EMPTY AND FAMILIAR?!
Clearly, he has rocks in his head.
Thank you, again, for reading with me. And now, I must pick up Pan, as I seem to be the only participant in this event who has not read it.
I have read 10 Thomas Bernhard books and I think you are right - this kind of sincere religious piety will be totally out of place. In fact I would argue that this high-falutin sentimentality, a part of the long tradition in Germanic literature, just that they will call it spirit instead of any particular religion, is actually one of the targets he consistently attacks.
ReplyDeleteI think Mason is saying that calling Fosse's (or Krasznahorkai's or any of the long sentence crowd's) prose "incantatory" is a critical cliché, empty and familiar as criticism. And given the blurbs on the Transit edition, he's right.
ReplyDeleteIt is interesting that Mason in a sense climbs down from the reviewer's post and just says what he experienced as a reader. What else can he do? The book made him want to pray!
That, Alok, was certainly my impression of Bernhard. I need to read some more of those.
What I like about Fosse (and Bernhard, and even Proust) is that they commit to an approach and stick to it, and it's that building up of style over many hundred pages that makes the reading of his books such a pleasure.
ReplyDeleteI have become interested in reading Nobel Laureates, so was keen to read this post. I know that Foss writes in a minority language for most Norwegians and is somewhat controversial, however, I would like to read him and wondered if Septology was avoid place to start.
ReplyDeleteCurrently, I'm reading The Story of Stone vol I. I read Benji a while back and have found this and easier read. I'm reading it on Kindle, which in this case helps as I can look up things immediately. I still prefer the physical book, but found Kindle was useful in reading Olga Tokarczuk's The Books of Jacob, which has lots of Polish and Yiddish words. So much so that although I had a Polish Jewish grandfather and speak some Yiddish and German, on which Yiddish is based, I found the look up function really useful.
I have added the Transit paperback to my wishlist; you are a good salesman. (Separately, I wish your comment software would remember my info so I didn't have to add it each time.)
ReplyDeleteYes, that "building up" is not exactly efficient in terms of word count, but it is a great way to create complex characters. We learn so much about Asle, or Mrs. Dalloway, through the little things they keep returning to in their thoughts.
ReplyDeleteClare, Septology feels like a major work, so likely a good place to start. I read the starker, trickier Trilogy first, which was fine, too, although less interesting in terms of characters. Same setting. Same character names! Fosse's names are schematic.
I'll have to try Tokarczuk sometime. How handy to instantly look up the Yiddish and Polish. What do I know from Yiddish or Polish.
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